And it's going to be really interesting, finding 5,000 words to cut elsewhere in the story to make room for the important stuff his scenes do.
Ah, well. I was worried that the overall pace was too draggy. There's at least that much fat to cut.
The story seems to be getting better. I wish I could feel that meant it was closer to done.
Ah, well. I was worried that the overall pace was too draggy. There's at least that much fat to cut.
The story seems to be getting better. I wish I could feel that meant it was closer to done.
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Date: 2012-07-19 12:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-07-19 04:33 pm (UTC)crackliterature to your standards is bound to take time. And so, so worth it for usaddictsreaders. Theintense highresult is profound.no subject
Date: 2012-07-20 07:28 pm (UTC)