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I need somebody who has worked in New Age retail, to tell me where I got the shop scenes wrong.

I need a mental health professional...now, stop laughing there...to tell me where I got the psychiatrist-shopping scenes wrong.

I need at least one Asatru practitioner with firsthand experience at Seidhr and/or Spae rituals. I'm so nervous about getting the Seidhr scene wrong, I can't seem to finish drafting it. That one scene is the big hangup for the whole manuscript.

I need at least one Asatru practitioner who uses runes for divination. This might be the same Asatru person as above.

I need somebody who knows the Pine Barrens way better than I do on the basis of my handful of day hikes.

As one of my best writing mentors likes to say: We are all ignorant, so the trick is to manage our ignorance.

Beta readers don't need to be writers, themselves. They do, however, need to be people I know in real life. Feel free to contact me by email, or reply here, or whatever. And thank you.

And now to go beat my head against the Seidhr scene some more.

Date: 2012-09-15 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bicrim.livejournal.com
I am a mental health professional, and can help with that part, if you want.

Date: 2012-09-20 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Thank you! That would be great.

Date: 2012-09-15 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aspenwolf.livejournal.com
My friend Rich would be a great resource for the rune-divination beta reading. Permission to get you in touch on FB?

Date: 2012-09-20 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Thank you for the offer. Alas, it's bad form to send a book that's under contract with a publisher to too many beta readers. I need to keep the number of folks who see the manuscript before it comes out relatively small, and limited to people I know in person if possible.
Edited Date: 2012-09-20 04:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-15 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cascade-writers.livejournal.com
I am only vaguely familiar with New Age shops from having hung out in them occasionally. Also, have shopped for many mental health pros.

May I say I am so grateful you are writing again?

Date: 2012-09-20 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
I've been pretty grateful about it, too. I've got this sudden boom of students, which is great for the family bottom line, but makes it a little trickier to find writing time. There will be a new equilibrium soon, I think.

Date: 2012-09-15 06:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sleepymaggie.livejournal.com
I grew up in south jersey near the pines and i'm in the pines often even today (pat's family lives next to fort dix). I could be your pine barrens person, if you like.

Date: 2012-09-20 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Yay! You were the first person I thought of for the Pines.

Date: 2012-09-15 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaime-sama.livejournal.com
I can't help with any of the specialized knowledge, but YAY, would this almost-finished story be the third Rugosa story? because YAY. :)

Date: 2012-09-20 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
It is, indeed. Once I've knocked about 5000 words out of it and tightened the pacing, it's really going to be yay-worthy.

Date: 2012-09-16 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasminewind.livejournal.com
I can't wait until you are ready for general beta readers. I love reading your stuff!!

Date: 2012-09-20 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Thank you!

My understanding--which may be wrong--is that it's bad form to have lots and lots of beta readers for a manuscript that's already under contract. I don't know how strongly my publisher feels about it, but I gather publishers like to have the biggest thumb in the pie. While I get a better sense of the etiquette, the only beta readers I'm looking for are the fact-checking folks. I'll probably be able to run the manuscript by my usual writing group, which has a critical mass of selling writers, but I don't know whether my publisher will prefer that I do that before or after the editor has a crack at it.

There's still a bunch of learning curve ahead of me about the business side of all this.

Date: 2012-09-20 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasminewind.livejournal.com
You could tell your publisher that even if I get to beta read it, I'm still gonna buy whatever you're selling! :-)

I get it though, do what you have to do!

Date: 2012-09-19 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakti-lemaris.livejournal.com
I've helped out at a few friend's pagan/New Age shops in Salem, also I've been known to vend paganesque products, also, yay! Another story by You to read!

Date: 2012-09-20 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Sounds like you're my designated occult shop expert. Thank you!

Date: 2012-09-20 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakti-lemaris.livejournal.com
shakti dot lemaris at gmail dot com , when it's time to send it
:-)
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