To Avalon

Dec. 15th, 2006 11:51 am
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Two figures--one tall and armored in gleaming steel, the other small and matronly in a wool coat--stood at the end of a city pier on a foggy December morning.

"We're going to need a bigger barge," said the author. "This one's about the right size for four queens and a bier, but everybody's going to want to come along. To see him safely across."

Sir Percival handed her a handkerchief. "Then write a bigger barge," he said, all patience.

"He has so many friends...had so many friends...we could fill up the Staten Island Ferry."

A bright blue triple-decker barge emblazoned with the words Avalon Island Ferry emerged from the fog and docked silently at the pier.

"You know the deal," said Percival. "He'll come back when you have need of him."

"But you know the deal, too. He'll come back as a memory, or some entirely different person. He'll never come back as our George again."

"Here, have a sip." Percival offered her the Grail.

"What's the point?" But she drank from it anyway.

"Listen to me," said the bearer of the Grail. "Before you met him, before he became your friend, he was already a minor figure of legend, wasn't he? He already had a hero's epithet."

The author laughed. "The Man Who Gets Things Done."

"And a full name you might have chosen for a comic book protagonist. Of course a George Marvil would be The Man Who Gets Things Done, wouldn't he?"

"The first time I heard someone call him by it," she agreed, "I thought it couldn't possibly be his real name. I thought it was just praise."

"He belongs where he's going now."

"Maybe so, but he belonged among the living, too. Was I a fool to call you here, Percival?"

"No. As long as the best specialists at the best cancer center in the world said there was still hope, someone had to speak for that hope. You were asked to speak for it."

The procession of mourners came slowly down the pier. They carried, shoulder-high, a man. Though it was a chill morning in the darkest time of the year, he was naked, for they were carrying him to a place where it was always summer, and his arrival would be cause for festival among the ones who would greet him there. What a long procession it was. Percival, whose eye for counting had been trained on armies, thought there were perhaps three hundred mourners, all come to see George Marvil on his way.

When the barge was full, the author stood on the deck and said, "Sir Percival, will you come with us?"

He shook his head. "Sloan-Kettering makes a fine Grail Castle. There are other Fisher Kings there. I should get back to them."

"I wish you victory," said the author.

He couldn't look her in the eye. "Even when I've failed you?"

"There was no failure here," she said. "Only things not working out. Go back to that hospital and give someone a victory."

Silently the barge began to drift across waters that were and were not the East River.

They waved to one another, the knight and his author, until the fog filled the distance between them.

Date: 2006-12-15 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sligoe.livejournal.com
I have follwed the story and not commented until now, because I knew the inevitable ending. You managed to make it wonderful, mystical, beautiful. Thank you for being such a faithful author and friend. Thank you for being there.

Manyy hugs---and many blessings, dear one.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackbear88.livejournal.com
Oh dear. I'm so sorry....

Your--his--story was beautiful.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakti-lemaris.livejournal.com
Oh my gods, Sarah. You're killing me.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakti-lemaris.livejournal.com
In an incredibly excellent and poignant way, I hope you realize.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
I knew there would be people who wouldn't be able to come to the memorial. Not that the details for the memorial are hammered out yet, but whenever it is, there'll be someone who just can't be there. I wanted a way for all of us to be together for him, even the ones who don't find out what's happened until months later.

There's plenty of room on the barge.

Date: 2006-12-15 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakti-lemaris.livejournal.com
I'll be there. Just waiting for the exact time and location. I'll be bringing a few more Evergreenies too. We won't be spending the night.

Date: 2006-12-15 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Thanks for letting me know. I've got three folks staying Saturday night for Yule, and I don't know if they'll be extending their trips for the memorial.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reynaud.livejournal.com
I'm sorry to hear about your friend.

And a very interesting take on the legend.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anghara.livejournal.com
This was incandescent. What a memorial you have given a friend.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasminewind.livejournal.com
You are so brilliant. Thank you for this wonderful gift.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalusoria.livejournal.com
In some ways, reading these has been harder. In many ways, easier. Thank you. Thank you, so much.

Date: 2006-12-15 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vgnwtch.livejournal.com
I told Sabri that this story in a chapbook would be something I would pay for, and I mean it with all my heart.

Date: 2006-12-16 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reynaud.livejournal.com
I'd buy that.

(Of course, for some reason, my mind immediately gets all fancy and sees illustrations and such, which on reflection does seem very practicle.)

Date: 2006-12-15 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeneralist.livejournal.com
And all the folks at work are wondering why I'm crying into my sandwich.

Date: 2006-12-15 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
Sorry about that. I always feel kind of weird about the whole making-people-cry thing.

Date: 2006-12-15 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeneralist.livejournal.com
Oh. Well -- please don't be sorry for this.

Date: 2006-12-16 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vgnwtch.livejournal.com
Erm, isn't it part of what this story/spell is meant to do? You know, touch people and move them?

Date: 2006-12-15 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinamari.livejournal.com
The Avalon Island Ferry is perfect for our most Marvilous King. He will begin to organize a festival event for all those at his destination immediately upon his arrival.

Date: 2006-12-15 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-pretentious.livejournal.com
By the time we get there, he'll have that eternal festival so smoothly organized, the people running the festival registration table at the dock will have our badges already printed up. There will be a program of events such that nobody ever has to choose between two things they want to do. Not only will there be drumming all night, not only will all the drummers have rhythm, but the drum circle will be far enough away so that those of us who prefer eternal rest will never have our sleep disrupted. Over in the Summerlands, the people who were Virgos in life will be welcoming George, saying, "Thank goodness you're here!"

Date: 2006-12-15 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinamari.livejournal.com
Yup---you are right on.

Date: 2006-12-15 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freefloat.livejournal.com
And from what I've been told, he'll have the food situation straightened out as well ;)

Date: 2006-12-15 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vgnwtch.livejournal.com
Someone said in [livejournal.com profile] sabrinamari's LJ that he'd probably get Picasso to do the t-shirts. I would not put it past him at all. I also vote for Gardner in the Bat Barn, Sybil Leek taking the 'Fake It With Authority' and Doreen Valiente taking 'Creating Liturgy' in the Priest/ess track, and who's taking bets on him having organised the Morrighan, Andraste, The Furies, and the Valkyries as perimeter guards while Maeve and Bacchus supply the drink and Ceres, the Matrones, the Disir, and the God of the Harvest are on kitchen duty? I mean, think about it - what could Geo not achieve under these circumstances??!

Date: 2008-10-03 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinamari.livejournal.com
Wow---this is such an appropriate vision for him as a Summerland Festival king.

Date: 2006-12-19 09:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diekonigin.livejournal.com
And the food......oh the food......he won't even have to ask again, "And how do you like the food?" because it will always be perfect.

Date: 2006-12-15 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vgnwtch.livejournal.com
The Avalon Island Ferry is perfect for our most Marvilous King

I told T about this, and he said, "That is fucking AWESOME!" He's all set to read the stories in order. He didn't realise you had an LJ, [livejournal.com profile] dr_pretentious, and was vastly amused at your moniker.

Date: 2006-12-15 10:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] citabria
You and I are Hope indeed. You told Sir Percival to go back and give someone a victory, and today I told someone to have a wonderful night and weekend because I want people to be having wonderful times full of joy, so those times will spread and resonate in us all. Yup, definitely hope.

Date: 2006-12-18 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kistha.livejournal.com
You have all my Sympathy.

I'm sorry I didn't get to meet the Marvilous King in this life. This was a lovely spell, hell it may even be a movement.

Many, many loves to you...
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